My heart was beating faster and faster. All I could see was the blurey waterslide. I placed my really slippery mat on the water sloped waterslide. Jasmine sat on the back of my mat. I could feel the water trickle down behind me. We slowly moved forward. All of a sudden we were off like a racing car. I felt like I was superman. We just got faster and faster! The water kept flying into my eyes. "I can't see. Ahh". Oh no we were going to ride straight into that disgusting mud puddle at the end of the waterslide. Splash! "Yuck. I'm doing that again".
By Daina Martin LC11
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This is fun writing. I feel like I'm there with you! I especially like the bit about feeling like superman. Keep up the great writing.
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing Daina. The water slide was my favorite activity and the water did taste like mud.
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