LC11 wrote this poem. Every person in the class, even Mrs Kenyon, contributed one line. Then we sorted our lines into categories.
This morning I saw Aiman
Cam
Mrs Kenyon
A birthday boy
Hayley watching TV
My brother snoring
My brother yawning
People walking to school.
This morning I saw fog.
This morning I saw pictures of the tsunami in Japan.
I saw really thick fog
This morning I saw leaves rattling on a tree.
Kids playing soccer
People going for a morning run
People playing soccer on the court
This morning I saw cars
A van
This morning I saw fog
This morning I saw a dead possum
My pet Corgie
My dog barking
My cats fighting
My cat playing with my next door neighbours dog.
This morning I saw the gleaming water in the shower
The shower running.
This morning I saw a big juicy plum.
This morning I saw fog.
What a neat poem LC11. I like the way you have mixed long sentences with short sentences to add interest. I can see that some people also used interesting adjectives like 'gleaming' and 'juicy'.
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awasome work lc11!!
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