Monday, March 14, 2011

This morning I saw....... By LC11

LC11 wrote this poem. Every person in the class, even Mrs Kenyon, contributed one line. Then we sorted our lines into categories.


This morning I saw Aiman

Cam

Mrs Kenyon

A birthday boy

Hayley watching TV

My brother snoring

My brother yawning

People walking to school.

This morning I saw fog.

This morning I saw pictures of the tsunami in Japan.

I saw really thick fog

This morning I saw leaves rattling on a tree.

Kids playing soccer

People going for a morning run

People playing soccer on the court

This morning I saw cars

A van

This morning I saw fog

This morning I saw a dead possum

My pet Corgie

My dog barking

My cats fighting

My cat playing with my next door neighbours dog.

This morning I saw the gleaming water in the shower

The shower running.

This morning I saw a big juicy plum.

This morning I saw fog.

2 comments:

  1. What a neat poem LC11. I like the way you have mixed long sentences with short sentences to add interest. I can see that some people also used interesting adjectives like 'gleaming' and 'juicy'.

    Miss B

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  2. awasome work lc11!!

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